by Beverlyn Feb 18, 2008
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Walking alone in the meadow, |
by mandy
That was very sad, but also very beautiful. The flow was good, but in the last stanza it was lost. It was a thoughtful subject to write about. I know this worries many people, and it's nice for the reader to be able to relate to the poem. Keep writting, 5/5! |