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by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost Feb 18, 2008 category : Dark, fantasy / dark, horror
Words can't describe how I feel And neither can I Feels like everything you ever told me Was a lie When you said you loved me I didn't want to believe it wasn't true But I know better than that Because it's coming from you Never again shall I speak the name Of the thing that caused me so much pain Never will I ask myself without you, How will I remain I'm throwing in the towel Backing down from the fight Because my heart is shattered So just get out of my sight Before I make you disappear Into eternal strife Because since you hurt me I've grown more familiar with my knife So the story ends now With one last stagger One more move sweety And your new name will be dolly dagger
by Lemma
Creepy, I like the way it addresses the reader at the end. The rhyming doesn't feel too forced and the flow was great. 5/5 Em xXx
by hannah
Groovy:D