Defining Me

by Lemma   Feb 18, 2008


I used to be so simple,
So easy to define.
Always used to colour
Inside the thick black lines.

I had the perfect life before
It was torn away.
It's a shame I only see it now,
Instead of yesterday.

Defining me is tough these days,
I don't know who I am.
But with the way I'm feeling,
I couldn't give a damn.

I just want to be happy.
Like I used to be.
I just want to feel better.
I just want to be me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, this was great. No flaws whatsoever. A catchy short poem. Very deep and meaningful.

    I do like your rhyme scheme, and I find it difficult for me to do as of late. Actually, writing is hard for me to do as of late. Kudos for keeping the rhymes going!

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    This poem is cool, it was well put together and has real emotion in it, that lets the reader know what you are feeling
    my fav lines were
    "I used to be so simple,
    So easy to define." love the use of the word define because u dont always see it written in poems
    good job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Really good work... Keep it up, you are nice poet

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    WOW!.. i couldnt have written it any better myself.. i felt like i was reading a poem someone wrote just for me.. i feel the same exact way and i can relate 100% Excellent poem!! i loved it and its going on my favorites! KEep it up!! =) i love your writing so far from what ive read.

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