My first attempt at a real love poem

by she   Feb 18, 2008


She's beautiful,
She's caring,
She's sweet, funny, and amazing!
She's got the sweetest laugh, even when she snorts
I look into her eyes and my heart melts
The sound of her voice, makes my soul tremble
I find myself staring at her wishing she was mine, while I watch her kiss her guy
I want her soo bad, but feel like dying when I realize I can't
Ive never felt loved but when she calls me hunny, I feel a happiness I've never felt
A happiness I cant explain.
I wish she was my babe, but as he holds her, I continue to just stand here & 4ever adore this angel, from my dream, the essence of my desire
[another poem on this website is called essence of divinity, so that is what inspired the last line]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats great, well done, wouldnt think it was your first time writing a love poem, but shows your talent xx

  • 16 years ago

    by biancaa

    Aww, i've never seen you write anything like this. your such a sweetie! =P

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow. u made me love this chica!!! <3