Soo,soo cute,your luv poems are great!
last lines good

Lovely, and i like the way it's both so heart-felt and animated, from the very beginning and that is what makes it different of many others 'typical' love poems, this one is so full of life
i mean i read some of your poems and they seemed kinda dark, and i think u need a lot of talent to write such "light" poems as well as dark
good job
5/5

I loved this poem as well! You could tell that there was a lot of emotion, very strong. Every stanza was well done, but I thought the ending could be a bit stronger... it seemed to weaken the last stanza. The rest flowed and rhymed really well!
5/5

That was definatley my favorite, can picture exactly what it is you were writing, keep it up
yours truly polaroid

This is a great poem. i love how there is an innocence about that makes it very light and happy but at the same time lightly dark. great job!