I believe this is quite a good poem for valentine... It almost has a rudolph the red nose reindeer feel to it, so again well done

Wow.. absolutely captivating.. from the start the reader would think on how sweet and nice valentine's day is.. then in the end.. BOOM! hehe.. i wasnt expecting that ending.. probably that's the reason why i gave this a 5.. good job there.. it actually caught me off guard..

~angel~

Very nice. It starts off beautiful and sweet then the end hits ya. I loved it. Your word choice is excellent and you captured my attention from start to finish...! 5/5

Ally. x

This is wonderful, great job...

Odd twist at the end, but nevertheless effective. A new take on a cliche idea - well done!
5/5

I can describe it in one word

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GOOD JOB

Aw i gonna cry

Made me weep a little

Really.. beautiful poem... and very well written... Good work..

Wonderful
Outstanding
Wow

i love you poems!!

10/10

Nice poem. it flows perfectly