Watch me watch you

by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost   Feb 18, 2008


I can see you
but you can't see me
because I'm just a ghost to you
and your just my wife to be

i keep hoping you'll notice
but all hope is gone now
because i want to talk to you
but i simply don't know how

because when i see you
I'm unable to speak
time keeps passing me by
day by day week by week

i have to take a chance
i just... got to
i can't just keep hoping that one day
you'll watch me as i watch you

(written for a contest)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Second stanza is my favourite. I like the rhyme although the flow was a little off at times. I like the pause in the last stanza too, slows the pace down for the ending. Not your best but I still like it.

    Em xXx