Awwww.... sweetheart you know i love it! ... your so sweet sometimes =]

*hugs you tight* kiss kiss. i love you.

That is beautiful!!!
I love it

Very sweet, I thought it was great. Although I think you made a mistake in thisline;
but the warmth of you embrace.
It should be but the warmth of your embrace.
Anyway good job.

I'm not really a fan of love poetry, personally. However I can't deny that this is a beautiful poem. It's not the best, but there is certainly nothing wrong with it.

Very beautifully penned.

"In my eyes there lies no vison,
but the sight of your beautiful face.
In my heart there is no feeling,
but the warmth of your embrace."

^This was my favorite part, a great stanza, the rhyme was really excellent!!

"but the thoughts of you,my Love."

You should put a space after the comma.

Overall, nicely done. I could tell your wrote this with passion and from your heart. Take care and keep writing! :)

"In my eyes there lies no vison,"
-In the title you spell vision a different way than you did in the first stanza.. I think it's spelled vision and not vison.. so, you may wanna change that. :]

Overall, a excellent poem with a rhyme. Very beautiful. You seems like you are very in love. :] 5/5

This is my fav poem of yours so far. i liked kind of repetition: no vision - but the sight of you; no feeling - but the warmth; no thoughts - but the thoughts of you. very thorough and tender poem. the title is beautiful btw