I do like this but i think it would be better if you spaced it and wrote normal not in caps because i get the feeling that your yelling at god and when you pray you dont really yell unless your really upset...and use bigger descriptive words..i need to get the feeling that you love him and mother earth,i need to get that feeling,i need to be able to actualt see and hear you praying!...but good work

Awww, AMEN!!!

Very sweet poem
brilliant job

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