Good job. I loved it. Make some more. Your really good at this stuff. lol

I really truely and honestly HATE poems that feel as if their part of your life. It's kind of creepy in it's own way. If this happened to you then strangely we went through the same thing, if not, get out of my head.

Reading things that relate to you are hard to put up with some times. and can be, in my little experince, hard to put to words.

Great job, and I mean that in a good way. This is a great song and the repeating that you put in add to it instead of taking anything away.