I look around..

by hopelena   Feb 18, 2008


I look around and try to find
The guy who could be of a special kind
But as if I suddenly become blind
And I only see you in my mind

Even when we are far or near
Remembering your smile makes my heart cheer
And takes away every kind of fear
Oh, to me you are really so dear

I have in mind a beautiful love song
Describing the bond we share that is so strong
This bond has been alive for so long
And it can never turn out to be wrong

No matter how far we try to part
We will always be close in thought and heart
We can always have a new start
That will make us never wish to be apart

Though there might by ups and downs
Our love can simply ease all our frowns
I feel I could shout in all the towns
And let the world envy our love crowns

I am ready to love and in passion drive
Let us together deep in love dive
And always fight and forever strive
To keep our love fire shining alive!

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  • 16 years ago

    by hopelena

    Thanks for your encouragement :)

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    My favourite lines are
    "Remembering your smile makes my heart cheer
    And takes away every kind of fear"
    they stand out and to me they mean the most in the poem
    the flow was excellent and i loved the choice of words, because u used words that u dont see everyday such as cheer
    u certainly have talent, keep up the good work
    5/5