Why Can't You See?

by Suicidal Love   Feb 18, 2008


The tears have been cried
And my blood has gone dry
Its over now and theres no going back

So this is it
The very end
Its over now and theres no going back

I'm not going to wait for you
Ive tried that before
Its over now and theres no going back

I needed you then
And probably still now but
Its over now and theres no going back

No going back, no going back.
Why cant you see - I don't understand
I need to go back

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  • 14 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is really really good.

  • 17 years ago

    by autumn

    I like this one alot bc at this moment im still waitin on someone n i dont even kow if he loves me or not

  • 17 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    I know how hard to fight to urge of wanting and staying yet you can't 'coz there's no reason to do so.. and you nicely portray it in here but the last stanza seems hanging somewhere or maybe i'm expecting of a more powerful ending. anyway, good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it. It was kinda sad. But it was still a good poem and a good read. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    Really good poem

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