Comments : Why Can't You See?

  • 16 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    Really good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it. It was kinda sad. But it was still a good poem and a good read. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    I know how hard to fight to urge of wanting and staying yet you can't 'coz there's no reason to do so.. and you nicely portray it in here but the last stanza seems hanging somewhere or maybe i'm expecting of a more powerful ending. anyway, good job

  • 16 years ago

    by autumn

    I like this one alot bc at this moment im still waitin on someone n i dont even kow if he loves me or not

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is really really good.