Awe, I hate this, but I have to be honest, Teria. I hope that's okay.
I strongly believe that no one can write a perfect love poem. Sure, there are some great ones out there, but I'm thorougly convinced no one can write a perfect one. Love is too hard to explain; if you're truly in love, you can't explain it. You know what I mean?
So, I must say, I didn't feel enough emotion from it. I didn't like you loved the guy..
I didn't want to fall in love.
You're a great writer, though. Just because I don't like one poem means absolutely nothing.