by Teria Feb 18, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Destination: Anywhere |
by Spirit
The title doesn't really give me a sence about what this poem is about. And even though you used the words in the poem, I didn't feel the conection there. I do however, like everything else about your poem. Well done. |
by justeene
Very well done it falls into place perfectly, line after line. |