by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx Feb 18, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
His words are like daggers, |
Good job on this. The flow was good, the word choice was decent, and the concept was great. How you put !SUICIDE! didn't appeal to me though. Try to refrain from that a little :P Overall great poem! 5/5 |