by Michelle18 Feb 19, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I'm sorry for being born, |
by noha
Waw its good one ,nice write and simple words show your point and how its strong,nice flow ,5/5 |
by Lizaveta
Awwwww, very sad.... |
by she
Wow, this hit home for me, i thought it was really good! 100/100 |
Great write! You've managed to use sorry many different times without wearing out the word! Thats talented... The flow was good, the word usage was great, and the concept was really good! 5/5 |
by Annabel
I really liked this one. I kept hoping that it wasn't going to turn out badly :( I think you've done well because you've managed to keep the flow equal with repeating "I'm sorry" without it getting monotonous. Well done 5/5 xxx |