Wow this poem is very well written i love the way u repeat "im sorry" its a really sad piece of work but very well expressed and i love it
the flow was good and i love the way u ended it it was a good way to finish it

ive added this poem to my favs
5/5

I really liked this one. I kept hoping that it wasn't going to turn out badly :( I think you've done well because you've managed to keep the flow equal with repeating "I'm sorry" without it getting monotonous. Well done 5/5 xxx

Great write! You've managed to use sorry many different times without wearing out the word! Thats talented... The flow was good, the word usage was great, and the concept was really good! 5/5

Wow, this hit home for me, i thought it was really good! 100/100

Awwwww, very sad....
this poem is unique. so many feelings mixed in this poem!! the repition of "i'm sorry for" makes it flow good and emphasizes the emotion of the poem
like in last your poem i've commented,the ending is unexpected and changes the whole meqaning and it's great. your poems are like a pazzle with an answer in the end, lol))
5/5

Waw its good one ,nice write and simple words show your point and how its strong,nice flow ,5/5