Lost In The Moment Of Time

by Michelle18   Feb 19, 2008


From the moment I met you,
I knew it was destiny.
I let that look in your eye,
Get the best of me.
I lay here wondering,
Where you are now.
I wish you would think of me,
Some way,some how.
I doze off to sleep,
Its your face that I see.
Your handsome eyes,
Are focused on me.
We're together at last,
Lost in the moment of time.
Right now I'm in your arms,
You're no one's lover but mine.
You're just a dream,
Is how it may feel.
But then I open my eyes,
And notice this is truely real.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Aw! I absolutely loved this! I thought it was very sweet, the way you described the relationship with the other person in the poem. The end surprised me, I wasn't expecting that. Great job.

    5/5

    -Briana

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Love it, love it, love it
    the emotion is so raw and I can honestly say I know exactly what you mean

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Aww this was just so sweet to read that I could not help but smile at the happy ending. I loved the title because it caught my eye and made me eager to read more. The flow was great and this was short sweet and to the point which made it even more of a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxMzPuRpLe BaBiiExXx

    I ADORE it!!!
    i related 2 dis poem!!
    but ma relationship turned out bad!!
    yeah i no, dats sucks!!! = [[

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Very nice! when i started reading, ithought it would be a sad poem but the ending really surprised me and made me smile. a nice way to express your feelings. wholly the poem is very light and flows good
    5/5

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