This is a very good poem and i liked it alot, the flow was excellent and kept me reading
its short but sweet and i think in my opinion just joke around and say i love you to him and just see what happens :)
and i suggestion would be write the poem out in actual words cause older people and others cant always read short hand and might down vote you for it
this was an excellent write 5/5

Rly lykd this poem hope u rite mre..x

This is a really nice poem...explains the sit. im in right now. 5/5 kep up the good work.

This is a beautiful poem. 5/5