Depression

by Christina   Feb 19, 2008


Depression
It's really hard to beat,
to get rid of.
It grows through my veins
waiting to attack.

I used to be so happy,
But now I'm always down.
The only thing I do,
is put a smile upon my face
and hope no one notices.

Depression
I wish it would go away,
but it won't.
It sucks every happy moment
I wish to have.

My life is becoming meaningless.
I might as well end it,
but that might be a mistake.
Maybe things will change,
maybe I will get better.

I can't deal with problems,
so I cut
and now I have to live
with scars up and down my arms
because of depression.

I want to fight it,
but I can't.
I'm much too weak
so I think I will die.
Goodbye

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  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Much, much, much better.
    This poem was a little more organized
    and more in place. It flowed a lot
    better. 5/5
    <3TAy

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Nice emotion, but me noticed it did not rhyme it was still good though 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well everybody can relate in this poem because everyone has experience depression in their lives. All I can say is... our life is like a tunnel sometimes we go to the 'darkness or sad part of our life' but in the end there's light. So never give up.

    Anyway I think that you've written this from your heart, well done.

    I have one suggestion.

    I used to be so happy.
    Now I'm always down.

    -I used to be so happy
    But now I'm always down.
    ^^ I think it will flow better that way.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    I liked this poem. The flow was nice, the words chosen were decent and the concept was good. I really like this :P 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    This poem is sad but please dont give up i was like u a month ago but then an old friend came back into my life and everything changed i still have bad days but i can see the light n i am going to be fine
    just hang on u will make it and everything will be fine but u completely give up u wont b, i believe u will be fine just try and stay positive
    the poem was very well written and well structured, i like the way u wrote it and the length was good it kept me reading and u really do have talent keep writing
    5/5

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