If i wrote you a poem

by StandStill   Feb 19, 2008


If i wrote you a poem with my tears
and in it i hid all my fears
would you still love me, my dear?
if i wrote you a poem, and i spilled my own blood
or i carved it out in the hardened mud
would you stil be my bud?
if i wrote you a poem in the middle of the night
and i couldn't see, the light's not bright
for me would you still fight?
if i wrote you a poem from the bottom of my heart
and i told you how i had loved you from the very start
would you still think im so smart

well, i hope so
because if not
you're not gonna think im so hott....

lol. i hate the ending. help me!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    LOL. My opinion? "Well, I honestly hope so, because if not... you're not going to think that I'm so hot." :) I liked this. Good job.

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