I chose this as my winner because I really liked the way you used the title as the first two words, the flow was flawless and the rhyme didn't feel at all forced. I also liked the way you used opposites like "wrap" and then "unfold". And the ending was fantabulous, it was a really sweet, poetic and original way of saying "I'll love you forever, even when I'm dead." 5/5

Em xXx