Comments : When Insanity Leaves

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very creative and beautiful from the beginning to the end. Whole piece is very deep and greatly written. You created flawless flow in every stanza and whole poem has peaceful, nice rhythm.
    Touching piece.
    My favorite stanza is:

    - I blamed you and the rage burnt.
    I blamed myself and guilt hurt.
    I gave up blaming and accepted.
    Then my love was resurrected.-

    Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Isabella

    A very emotional poem whith an excellent flow and good rymes. 5/5