Now, this is indeed amazing! well-flowed....well-punctuated well-expressed everything just sounded well-done! I congratulate you for such a piece. :)
I really can't pick a favorite stanza here, since all of the poem was amazing and valuable but well I found this part really interesting:

Leisured fares on lake-shore banks
No longer have sugar or salt
And gentle maids will walk along without me.

^^^^^

This stanza really had me wondering, Sir, for minutes, I found it so wonderful to describe such feelings in this way....:)