by Coffee Loves Nachos Feb 19, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Months ago, |
Very well written 5/5 |
Wow, that was the same girl your first poem on here was about. I love it. I love the repetition. How you started a line and repeated a few of the same words in the next line to begin it. It was great. Showed hesitation, or just a pause. Made it more dramatic. I loved it. |
by Love vs Fate
I thought id drop by and read your poem again, so much talent in this poem. i love it. its now on my fav's. great work! |
by Love vs Fate
Wow i like this poem. your not afraid to show your feelings and thats not very common among people. but hey i love it! 10/10!! |
by Katie
I really like this one. The flow is nice, and it's pretty powerful. Great job. =] |