Lucid Designs

by NyellMoonlight   Feb 19, 2008


Silent, whispering zephyr
slithered down the skin, freely
exploring lost and found hopes,
caressing soul with secrets concealed;

Fingertips plunged into the pupils of green,
with ivies enwrapped around the heart, peacefully
touching senses with vivid grace,
embracing teary sunsets of raw emotions.

Verdant magic within single kiss
weaved motions of spring affection,
sprinkling divine fragrance of herbs between tunes,
constraining spherical, godlike obsessions.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I am speechless, you really took my breath away in this poem. Your imagery amazed me and your usage of words was outstanding! You should keep writing nature poems like this one, because you have so beautiful descriptons and they always turn out to be so great. Keep writing, always and forever....

  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Hey, interesting poem, I loved the words that sculpted such beautiful imagery. Kepp writing, Greta xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Flawless and beautiful are the two words that come into mind after reading this piece. Truly exceptional piece of poetry that lets me take a peak into your mind. Brillant. I enjoyed the choice of words here because they were different from the ones I encountered in your other pieces. This was light, fresh, tranquil and not as dark. You wrote this flawlessly as well as your dark pieces. Another amazing gift you have is that youre so versatile. You can write about anything and it will be excellent.

    I truly did enjoy reading your work and am adding you to my favorites so I could look out for new ones by you. Thank you so much for the comment it truly means a lot.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    Very beautiful. As always, I'm in awe over this one. You're are truly talented. Amazing work.

  • 16 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Again, I'm glad I came here. It's a pity how finding such poetry here is like sifting for gold; backbreaking, exhausting, and generally fruitless.
    But when you find something this good, it makes every other failure in searching worthwhile.
    5/5, just fantastic.