I really like this poem. it shows what you are feeling in a way, and if you write your feelings, then it will be an awsome poem

Could be a bit longer, short yet nice <333

Even though it isn't the largest poem that I have ever read, it packs a lot of feelings in the small size. This is a great poem. I can't necessarily tell what you were thinking, but I believe that's what makes good poets.
keep up the good work!
jenna.

It's short, but I really like it:)
good emotion.