Out Of Reach

by Sarah   Feb 19, 2008


I am in the crowd..
A lot of people around
Feeling abandoned..
Nowhere to be found
Calling out for a friend,
Asking him a hand to lend
I need to feel safe and sound..
I need to correspond !
I have a lot of tears to shed,
A lot of scars to mend
Heal my wound,
Embrace my soul..
Take me away
& Make me whole..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jaime

    That was a very good poem. I have to suggest adding punctuation and the usual things like that.

    At first, I was a little unsure about your use of the word 'correspond' because it wouldn't typically be used the way you did. But I decided I love it, because in a way you need both definitions of the word.

    Other than the punctuation, I think this poem is golden, and I wish you luck with it.

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