Lost cause

WOW! This is really sad and deep. Although this poem is not very long in length, its meaning goes a long way. I loved it. This is one of the few poems that I have read that has actually brought me to tears. You did a great job. Even though you used the most simplest words, it still brought out the emotion that you wanted. Keep writing.

Letty

Sad poems... It's okay... I chose not to vote for sa dpoems because to some it would hurt... You can feel the writers pain and if you can feel it they are good... Nice job...