HATE

by Amir Riveroll   Feb 19, 2008


You try so hard to
make me brake
the things you said i
could not take
the anger now
forbids to shake
all i have for you
is ecliptic hate

you stooped so deep
you have blocked my air
and all i could do
is watch in fear
you left me numb
with a simple stare
my time is near
mess with me
do you dare???!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Amir Riveroll

    This poem goes out for the critics, the racist, and predugist... life is a circle, they will get they're share... lol

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    It all fits in together but the last line i dont know it throws off the flow of the poem. the i dont care just throws it all off, in opinion change the i dont care into something different or a bit better wording for it.

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