Very differently written and that's what attracted me. It's nice!

Omg i love this. really good job.

Great poem. (thanks for the comment!) it kinda captures the whole stop and smell the roses feeling being taken away....u no.

I agree that this poem is very unique,The way you put this together is awesone,you really did not need a lot of words,you made the point very well.outstanding.

Niciez poem! keep up great worx!
xoxo