There was a lot of emotion and it really was the last line that was the most effective to me and why I give it a 5/5. Keep it up!
-oNice

Wow.. the anger.. the resentment.. the hate.. well i felt it all there.. it actually quite shocked me to find out it was channeled to your dad.. well i hope you guys work it out.. as for the poem, it conveyed your emotions well.. cause i sure felt it even though i had nothing against my own dad.. good job ^_^

~angel~

Wow this is amazing!.. its really really powerful and so full of emotion.. the flow is flawless and the rhyme is perfect!!.. it kinds reminds me of my style of writing.. and i love the ending.. it was such a perfect ending to a great poem.. very sad.. but great write!.. keep it up and thanks for the comments =)

Excellent...

I think that in your poetry have mistakes... So check it carefully...

Ooo i love this i can relate a lot but more for my mom, the flows pretty good and this is something a lot of people can relate to... 5/5

Nice flow nothing is forced at all and this poem seems simple but is very complex at the same time, which is great.
lovely job