This was short but still great.
I loved the flow of it. it was flawless.
great write.
5/5

I love this, it is truly amazing. You managed to say so much within such short piece which is impressive. Beautiful poem, very original. I like your choice of words and superb atmosphere that you created.
Amazingly done
5/5 from me

Loved the feel of this poem..nice work!

OMG... Really nice poem... I like it :)

Lol..i'm going to say that i don't usually like poems with a rhyme or style, because i think poems shul just come from the heart, but this is really good..

"take me from this nightmare world,
wake me.
lonely, broken girl. "
^^^ totaly love that!!
great job
5/5
***aLy***

Good job. I really enjoyed reading this keep up the good wrok! -Nikki

Wow, this format was really different. I actually thought it wasn't going to rhyme or flow very well, but it didn't! It was a tad bit short though. :\ I would have like to seen you go into more details about what made you a "broken girl". While we're on the subject of broken girl, I think the word broken is just a little over used. Maybe you could try a different word to describe it. Just a thought, you don't have o do it. :]

I liked the concept and flow, so great job. :]]

Keep writing!
Cayce

This poem can be read as two different people are speaking. For example the first stanza can be read like this:
1: Tears are running from my eyes
2 (Whispered): Kiss me
The way you wrote this poem is original and interesting. I liked the structure a lot. The rhymes were good, and th choosing of words couldn't be better.

Enjoyed reading this poem 5/5

Short but the flow was amazing!
There isn't anything bad to say about this one, it's perfect. I love your rhyming, and it all went together really well. =) 5/5 I think the last stanza was the best.

~*Caitlin*~

Brilliant

I liked this poem very much

5/5

-Syn

I like it it was short but emotional!

I thought it was a cute poem. Short, but sweet. I really like the last verse. I read it as one, and it really read well. I guess I really enjoyed the rhyme in that one. Clever.

Very nicely done :)

This was really good. I liked the rhyming, and the meaning behind the piece. Though, I do wish it were a bit longer, but meh. Still a good poem.

5/5

-Briana

Short and writing with emotion. Good job.

Short and writing with emotion. Good job.

Short, but with so much emotion put into it! the rhyming was flawless and the flow was awesome... nice job on this one!!