Hush, Hush

by mikaella   Feb 20, 2008


Her eyes are closed, she's asleep.
So don't try to wake her, don't make a peep.
Hush, Hush
She looks so delicate, like the petals of a carnation.
She truly is the most beautiful creation.

Her bed is filled with white soft lace
And there's cheap make-up painted on her face
Hush, Hush
Her lips and eyes, they're glued together
And her once full body looks as light as a feather

Look at her sound asleep,
You CAN'T wake her, so don't you weep.
Hush, Hush
Don't you cry
Just walk away and say goodbye.

Hush, Hush

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  • 15 years ago

    by Tiiffaanyy

    Ayee...!
    I really like this one
    great job on it
    5/5 =]
    Keep up the good work!!

  • 16 years ago

    by OLA OLUWASEUN

    It's true that the only thing one can do is just to walk away and say goodbye. It's lovely.

  • 16 years ago

    by OLA OLUWASEUN

    It's true that the only thing one can do is just to walk away and say goodbye. It's lovely.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Echoes like a piece of music tuning for a little girl.

    Beautiful. It sounds like a gentle melody. A Slow, divine lullaby. Very impressing. Great JoB!

    ~Hush, Hush~ A wonderful chant.

    *Thanks for the comment on my poem*

    5.5 Keep writing, kiddo!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jesslyn

    This is very original i like it a lot!