3 years ago

by AmandaRose   Feb 20, 2008


Life was better three years ago
when I had no worries or fears
about 3 years ago
I wasn't afraid of my tears
3 years ago the sun was out
it over power the rain
but that was the past
a very long time ago..
now.. everything has changed..

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  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    I voted 5 on your poem.

    You a brand new writer, and you shouldn't give up on writing.

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    Practice, and practice writing. You have alot of talent, don't give up.

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