Comments : Goodbye dear liar

  • 16 years ago

    by Dan

    This poem was the sh*t. Honestly the flow was there and made you keep on reading. And I connected to the last 2 lines especially well.

    i didn't abandon you.
    i just set myself free

    Those lines are very powerful and given how they were used you put forth alot of emotion into them. I myself would try to capitalize the I's but that is just for me. Great poem

    -Daniel