Aww this was cute!!!!
Really it was.
Adding to my favorites!
5/5

This is very cute. I love the word choice and the flow. Nice work. 5/5

XxXKristie MarieXxX

Omg! Awww, that was so sweet. I usually always hate love poems, but this one was really awsome. I liked how the girl and the boy were passing the note. Haha, that was so clever. I would have never thought to do something like that. The flow and rhymes and stuff like that were good. Great jobb!

Keep writing!
Cayce

Ahh this is just the poem I need to read today! Oh it jusst made me soo happy and I cannot stop smiling! I loved the different concept ... it builded such great suspense that I was eager to find out how the poem ending. You desriptions of love were so beautiful that I was blown away and from the first stanza I knew I could relate.

"Forget being discreet, I want you,
Just tell me what I have to do,"
^I feel like that now! I am sick and tired of containing my loving emotions .. I just want to straight out scream " I LOVE YOU"

Wonderfully done here. This poem just made my day. So glad I read it. Well done *5/5* for sure.

Awww.. this is a really cute and sweet poem... your brain works like magic lol... i would have never thought of coming up with a poem like this...im impressed... the flow was perfect..

theres just one thing... near the middle of the poem i noticed that your rhyming pattern changed..

but i still love it..and thought it was very well written.5/5

Haha...exelent poem...good flow and overall good poem...I enjoyed reading this...I acualy wanna read it again

This was quite unique. I don't think I have ever read something like this.
I really enjoyed it, and I thought you did a really good job writting it:)
The content was sweet, and the words painted a cute picture.

5/5
--Elly.

Wow, this is really a unique piece. *congratulations* Very sweet poem. :D

Awwwww~
Man am I gonna get bashed for such a useless use of syllables. "Awww"
Pft, talk about a useless comment.

Okay, seriously though, I like how you're being braver with your use of punctuation here (in comparison to The Diary)~
Braver, and it's working for you. Keep at it, this is great!
5/5, just super.