Fee-faw-fum

Romantically dark and delightfully original

Hmm.. very dark, i like it.

Wow, I can really feel the emotion in this poem. Amazing job.

A game
A glutted feed for me
A presser
A bit by my fangs
dry your whole blood
and turned your life
change you forever...
^^very descriptive and true i read a lot of books about vampires so i enjoy your analogies

A smack
A hit by my head
A sketch
A cut by my nails
take your beauty
and in the end
You will be Fee-faw-fum
^^i love the last line it made me smile

: ) another great poem!! 5/5

This one was good but not as good as the others, in my opinion, interesting job