by noha Feb 20, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
There are millions of people but no one is like you. |
by LoveTear
Nice , all u mix it well and become a great poem ! God job |
I liked how you put this poem into your own words, and your own feelings. Good Job 5*5 |
by Teria
This is a really good poem, I think you held your emotion well in it. Once again the "u"'s and so on. Maybe break this one into stanzas as well? I'm not quite sure, it's a good poem but it seems the outlook of it isn't the best,eh. |
by mohamed
Wow very beautifully written. I enjoyed reading it..keep writing 5/5 |
by vaibhav shah
You have written fantastically.I love it very much.Beautiful expression in an effective rhyme scheme. |