I love you

by noha   Feb 20, 2008


There are millions of people but no one is like you.
i feel such deep feelings because i love you.
no one in this world is such a grace.
no one is so able to fill Ur place.
you always know but i never say,
how your love increase every passing day.
my feelings are many but words are few.
clouds are dark but sky is blue.
love is paper, life is glue.
every thing is false, only my love is true.
to be honest with you.
i don't have words to make you feel better,
but i do have arms to give you a hug,
ears to listen to what ever you want to talk about,
a heart that is aching to see you smile again,
I'm sorry if i cause you all this pain,
i will say it again and again,
I'm sorry its hurt me to see you hurt ed .
i know few words about love.
loving is not how you forget but how you forgive.
not how you see but how you feel.
not how you listen but how you understand.
not how you let go but how you hold on.
i hope that you will forgive me one day.
i love you amr

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoveTear

    Nice , all u mix it well and become a great poem ! God job

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    I liked how you put this poem into your own words, and your own feelings. Good Job 5*5

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    This is a really good poem, I think you held your emotion well in it. Once again the "u"'s and so on. Maybe break this one into stanzas as well? I'm not quite sure, it's a good poem but it seems the outlook of it isn't the best,eh.

  • 16 years ago

    by mohamed

    Wow very beautifully written. I enjoyed reading it..keep writing 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by vaibhav shah

    You have written fantastically.I love it very much.Beautiful expression in an effective rhyme scheme.