Senses

by The Sky is Falling   Feb 20, 2008


Blue as ice,
Are your eyes.
I see the lust,
Burning in the depths.

Crimson as roses,
Are your lips.
I taste the desire.
mingle with the sensation.

White as snow,
is your skin.
I smell the sex,
burning up our bodies.

Silver as silk,
is your voice.
I hear the passion,
moan out your wants.

Black as coal,
is your heart.
I feel the hate,
Killing me slowly.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I really enjoyed ths senual poem and i would not change a thing about it

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Very nicely written piece. .
    I like the structure you used for this piece and the wayy you wrote/worded everything. It's.. unique. :] Your desrciptions were good and your emotion were expressed nicely. A great write. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    I like it. Your poems have a really good flow to them. You're good with words. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    I like it.
    It flowed well and th wording was good.

    "Killing my slowly."
    I think thats suppose to be me.

    Keep it up 5/5

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