Facade

by Danielle   Feb 20, 2008


A carefree child
once was I
A facade
shortly there ended
now others and lovers seek my tribunes
to be disapointed with an empty heart
Oh carefree child
return to me
if only for one minute,
past breaths will be justified.

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  • 16 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    This poem is good i like it
    keep up the great work

  • 16 years ago

    by FallingAngel

    It is a good poem but feels incomplete, you gonna add to it? Either way it's very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Good poem
    short simple
    and to the
    point. i did
    like it but it
    somehow
    felt like is was
    incomplete. at
    least to me.
    anway thank you
    for the read i
    enjoyed it. great start.
    O_O

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