Comments : Remember: Take hold of your time here.

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Very good poem, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brandy

    Amazing love the rhyming...

  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    I like it because it shows how much you care about the world we live in. i give it a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Hey.. good one.... 5/5