Save me (contest)

I loved the simplicity of this poem, it was so pacey and easy to read yet so meaningful at the same time. I especially like the way you incorporate the title into the last line obviously but without repeating it. The rhyme felt really natural and the flow was perfect! 5/5

Em xXx

This was a real good poem it wasn't wordy but clear and to the point well done I am impressed Plot121

It's not wordy and though short I think it says a lot, i really enjoyed reading it on the contest thread, so I had to come comment. I really like the second stanza, but it all flowed nicely, great job. Good luck in the contest :)