Good, good-work

I thought the repetition in this poem was really good, and the way you altered it at the end made it stand out and linked the title to the poem really well. The stanza that stood out most for me was:

"I can see your joy
in hearing other's screams
I can see your smile
when you tear apart their dreams"

It was kinda evil and sinister,

5/5

Em xXx