Sammy,

How very beautiful in all it's darkness!
I loved it!!

kisses and hugs,

Ingrid 5/5

Sam
What a deep and intense piece you have penned here. The imagery is awesome.

As the souls of men are filled by pleasurable lies
Desires of malice taunt the wings of liberty
Relinquishing the freedom of hope
Lying to rest thoughts of a peaceful death

Love your ending.
Great job!
Love Cindy

Wonderful poem i loved it

Great poem. :)