Someone To Love Me

by Adam RIP Lesthat and Cody Hayden   Feb 21, 2008


I wish i had someone to love me,
like i used to.

but i screwed up,
and what do ya know i lost her.

now i am trying to get her back,
which is hard because she has been taken.

how i wish i had someone to love,
to hold, and to kiss again like before.

oh how i wish i had,
someone to love me

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  • 16 years ago

    by ilu

    That was short but a very very beautiful poem!...
    Good job!!..Lots of emotion shown in here...
    5/5..^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Sydney

    This poem is sooo beautiful in just a small amount of words. Great job. Keep it up! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Dont we all? haha great great poem. simple but it expressed how you felt VERY well. i think it was excellent. id love if ud check out suma my poems! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I liked it alot. I dont believe she would ever be over you fully because you and her had a baby! you should always know that you will have a special place in her heart! So if you really want her back, go out and get her dont sit and wait just because she is taken. But i think it is short sweet and down to the point! Keep your head up smile be happy for everything you got and everything your going to have later in th future((5))

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Lesthat u could have told me how you felt.great job!
    **harlea

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