Time seems slow

by devils angel sunrise   Feb 21, 2008


Time seems slow now that i sit back and think on and angel in new mexico
she made the sunrise she held my heart
she was confused so what should i do
and time slows as i think about her i lose it all together when the smile draws its self across my face
my mind wanders to a better time and the what ifs of new mexico

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    My lovely sunrise, where have you gone? time is passing far too slow for your angel in new mexico.....

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Good one... but need to structure the sentences more properly... some of the too long... don't you think so?

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Awww.....love it. sounds like a lucky angel...

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