I like the rhyming, (not to be rude, just a statment) but personaly i don't think there is a lot of time. you only have about, 98 years to live and really, it's not long enough, there is so much to learn and so little time to grasp it. And not everyone can just get over what has happend, you know what I mean?
it's nothing though, just wanted you to see a diffrent perspective, good job. I liked it.

Thanx no offense taken