by Jade Shadow Rose Feb 21, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
So too, are you, stuck in this mess, |
That has potential for a really good song. Fine job. Shows a lot of emotion and some great description. Keep up the good work and in the future you could be in school text books. |
by Lorryn
This was so beautifully written, you have a great talent, especially with description, im adding it to my favourites... |